"At the end of the day, day
My momma told me don't let no one break me, let no one break me
At the end of the day, day,
Nobody, nobody, ever could stop me, ever could stop me
At the end of the day, day
You can't regret it, if you were trying, if you were trying
At the end of the day, day
I'm walking with a heart of a lion, yeah"
Don’t think i’ve read this one before but i like! simple, to the point and a good war/ethics discussion starter, especially if you’re using it in class.
I think it’s amazing how simply you have put across the point that war is a rich man’s response to something they can’t have (like oil) and how it’s the poor that fight and loose everything as a result. Pride is a stronger emotion than maybe we think!
So not fair! But this is the world we live in… so bad we cant really do a lot, right? Who´s gonna make the rich men poor? Who´s gonna make the poor wealthy?
Amazing Bro,
simple and powerful
Don’t think i’ve read this one before but i like! simple, to the point and a good war/ethics discussion starter, especially if you’re using it in class.
I think it’s amazing how simply you have put across the point that war is a rich man’s response to something they can’t have (like oil) and how it’s the poor that fight and loose everything as a result. Pride is a stronger emotion than maybe we think!
love it..
I agree with The cello string!!
If it were only that simple. Oil is but a pawn in the overall scheme of things. Money and power, no matter their shape or substance, are the things men ask other men to kill and die for. Very good write, Lee.
http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/09/21/in-the-blink-of-an-eye/
I agree…if it only it were that simple. Thanks for taking the time to stop by (again)
Single points, like headlines, asking the questions with answers too complex. Nicely done.
All too true. I wrote this piece last year, in response to things I was seeing. Nobody seemed to have any real answers.
never more true! love it! my thursday.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2011/09/21/human-race-human-waste/
Sleek & simple..nice
Well done. It gets to the point like a rapier.
War goes on and on, no one really has the answers.The innocent keep asking.Thought provoking lines.
So not fair! But this is the world we live in… so bad we cant really do a lot, right? Who´s gonna make the rich men poor? Who´s gonna make the poor wealthy?
Happy Rally!
Love it. The feel and it’s pace–excellent. What I also like is it’s short in length. To me it strengthens the poem. Again, love it.
You now have a new fan! Brilliant! Consider my Free Write Friday…would love to have you contribute!
very enjoyable, keep it up.
i like it! powerful words. i walk away from here thinking…
The words are gripping and powerful.
Nicely done …
Isadora
http://insidethemindofisadora.wordpress.com/2011/04/05/yes-how-old-we-get/